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for A New Beginning (DH -COMPLIANT)

by Ms_Figg

schedule August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent chapter! :D
person kimi
schedule August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I found your fic, before i had to go to work so i only got the chance to read the first chapter, but i do adore it already, and i gotta say JKR gave our dear professor the short straw in life... thats why we keep him happy in fan fics right? I hope the rest of the fic is as good as the first chapter, it amused me...

Kimi
schedule August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm poor Hermione I can just picture the type of guys Harry would set her up with. Also I have a question, will Sev be getting jealous ? I hope so, I like jealous Severus.
person Ele
schedule August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Reply to your reply: I had suspected you were still not well, just wanted to aid you there ;). I hope you get well soon.

Concerning the lack of talking being childish: that's exactly my thinking. Yet I am forced to constantly being annoyed by stories who develop their plot exactly out of such childish behaviour that is so out of character for someone as reasonable as Severus Snape (or Hermione). I just wanted to express my gratitude that you did not fall into this trap.
person lala_land
schedule August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
when are you updating>
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww do i smell relationship brewing in the cauldron? Oooh yes I hope so!
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter! :)
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great chapter! i am enjoying the slow build up...its nice that they have not immediately jumped into bed...they are taking the time to get to know each other as individuals and not as professor and student...at this point they are just becoming aware of each other...this is great!
person Domenica
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay, update! I liked this chapter very much. Normally in your stories Hermoine has to fight to get Severus to this stage (which is always entertaining!) but this time there seems to be such an easy flow into it...it's nice (not that it ever isn't nice!). Please continue, I wait with baited breath!
person lala_land
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohh god i just read the book and Lily and Snape was suppose to be togther!!! BUt he hang out with death Eaters To much!!!! I feel so sorry for Snape!!