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by Ms_Figg

schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OoOO! Things are getting even more interesting! :D Absolutely LOVE what is going on. :D
person pittwitch
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh me oh my. Rod is in deep, but Hermione's on his side. Look out Ministry.
person Anon
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nteresting!~
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person Anon
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lovely chapter. Can't wait fo rmore.
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yelling at her to eat seemed right on, to me. Severus wouldn't blurb out romantic nonsense, especially at their first meal together. I'm surprised though that he didn't insist, in this private setting, that she call him by his first name. All this 'Professor-ing' is not conducive to a friendlier atmosphere. It's like a wall between them.
person Ms_Figg
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've never seen Snape as someone who allows anyone to use his given name unless there's a good reason for it. It is his last bastion of "reserve." I've written countless stories where Hermione and he are having sex, and she still calls him Professor. lol. Don't ask me why but it seemed suitable. Besides, this way, when he finally does tell Hermione to call him "Severus" you can be sure there's a damn good reason for it.
person Ms_Figg
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
As far as the intimate setting, he made it appear they were "celebrating her success" rather than it being a romantic dinner. Saying, "call me Severus, Hermione" here, to me anyway, would have been awkward because there was no basis for that dramatic change. He told her he preferred being called by his former title. Why would he suddenly change this preference? This was still a business-based dinner, albeit a very nice one. Or that was what he wanted Hermione to think though they did talk about very personal matters.
person Apryl
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
** raises eyebrow** Oysters? LOL I have a feeling that the following words are going to come back and bite Severus in the ass:
person spaz141
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm crushin' on Rod. *hopes he's not evil*

Interesting story you have going, but if I may, I'm pretty screwed up with the time line. Still enjoying the read. Thanks!