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August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! :D
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August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"Snape and Severus retired to his study"
I've been noticing that for quite a while but since the chapter is all about it it's just right to bring it up now: I really like that you emphasize the fact that attractive does not automatically mean skinny. And yes you're right: that is something especially younger men tend to say (although my father has this way of looking me up and down and saying 'doesn't really get less, eh?', too and I'm far from having too much weight... *shakes head*).
I've been noticing that for quite a while but since the chapter is all about it it's just right to bring it up now: I really like that you emphasize the fact that attractive does not automatically mean skinny. And yes you're right: that is something especially younger men tend to say (although my father has this way of looking me up and down and saying 'doesn't really get less, eh?', too and I'm far from having too much weight... *shakes head*).
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August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ele: Thanks for pointing that out. Kind of tired. Yeah, a little meat hurts nothing. :) you know, one of my most popular snippets is the one where Severus prefers large women. I got a lot of positive emails about that. Being a big girl myself, I go where I know. ;) Screw underrepresentation. lol. ***
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August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HEHEHE, another excellent chapter! (as always!) :D
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August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
<3 the new chapters. Yeah I noticed that error in the beginning too the 'snape and severus' thing, but it was pointed out before I could say something XD Yay.
And now I'm off to make a cheesecake XD Thanks for that.
And now I'm off to make a cheesecake XD Thanks for that.
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August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A peck on the cheek was a great start. I hope things start to progress now that they have gotten the first "date" out of the way.
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August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohh my god that was so sweet More more more
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August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice, talking about your sex life... weird, but love it all the same
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August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
scary, please dont let tom corrupt him!! please update soon!!
love your website!!
love your website!!
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August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wAHHHH only a peckoh well it was still a really really good chappie!!!