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for A New Beginning (DH -COMPLIANT)

by Ms_Figg

person lala_land
schedule August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
amazing please please write more
schedule August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved the chapter!
person Tenar10r
schedule August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I loved the speech, this is wonderful.
person CB13
schedule August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ms_Figg - I don't know if anyone else has pointed it out to you, but I believe that Neville Longbottom was, in his childhood, feared to be a Squib until his uncle accidentally dropped him out a window. Neville bounced, revealing his magical abilities...so I think your use of this float thing is just a logical extension of that phenomenon.

Excellent use of "Slyterinishness" as well.

Cheers, as always

Christina
person Claudia
schedule August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*wipes her tears away* well, THAT was how the loss of Fred Weasley, Dobby and Tonks and Lupin should have been mentioned !!!!!! And THAT was what Snape deserved !!!!!
schedule August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person Tenar10r
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great idea with the 'Float Effect'!
person Jen618
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ruth, I just can't tell you how much I love this story. You've really created something special in this storyline. I check all the time for a new chapter, and i never do that!! Thank you!
person Jen618
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, one more thing, I love your description of an "older" Hermione. It's not often you get a realistic view of a 40 yr old woman -- they seem too often to have perky breasts????? I'm over 40 and know that nothing is perky! So I'm loving a more realistic description. I like young hermione too, I don't descriminate, but older is more interesting. I had to put this in after reading another review.
person Tigersue
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Just found this fic and read it all in a couple of days - really enjoying it and hope you write more soon. You've got some brilliant ideas and the story is very cleverly put together. I'll keep an eye open for the next chapter!

Tigersue
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