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OK, I appreciate all the time it took to do that, bu I'm afraid I hate what you had her do. I REALLY object to her doing that. Really object to it. If I were him, I'd dump her there. End of story. That was a silly stunt on her part. I guess, also, when you first start dating someone, why does it have to be true love - if there is such a thing? Other things she should have taken into consideration: he's a smart guy who is OK being alone, meaning, he doesn't "need" her (big plus); he's not doing it for sex, he had that covered; he wouldn't, without a great deal of consideration, jeopardize her working for him -- so he's put thought into it (v big plus); he looks after her kids. And here she is treating him like an errant schoolboy. Nope, does not work for me. She's being a pretentious prat.

Don't worry, I am laughing at myself, this is the most upset I've ever been in a review! And I like you!!! But I have one more thing: on rels. She's not so experienced. She had one relationship with someone who was probably not that demanding to be with, neither intellectually or emotionally. So it's not like she's the bees knees of relationships. OK, I really think I'm done now. But you know I still love the story...

Whew. Let it out, Jen! Let it out! I've said it before, I don't always agree with what the characters do in the stories I write, but it keeps things interesting. If you get this pissed off, I'm doing something either very right or very wrong. ***

Chapter 18 -- stunning. What a fabulous and thoughtful and beautiful summation of all that happened, and an awesome way for Harry to release Severus from his own personal hell.

This is a wonderful story.

I'm one of those reviewers people hate. I don't review every chapter and when I do it's usually to flame, so please stop reading. But I can't help it, I stopped myself from saying anything after chapter 50. And again in 51. Now it's 52 and from the looks of it at least 53 and I can't keep it in anymore. I loved this story up until then. Hermione's growing feelings, Snape's feelings about Lily and Hermione. The kids, Rod, the stone, her patronus, everything.... And then came the online dating thing. OMG, that has to be the cheesiest thing I've ever read and totally OOC for both of them. I just find it totally unbelievable and feel it takes away from what has been a wonderful story up until now.

ROFL! All in the name of research and literature! Well, I for one appreciate the time you took to do the test. It also amuses me to picture Severus sitting in front of a PC with a scowl. Great Chapters, Ms. Figg! I KNOW I'll particularly enjoy the next few, lol!

Aw geez. I don't know...I think this is kind of lame and a bit OOC for Hermione.

loved this chapter looking forward to next update

Oh my...You took the test as Severus? That's the most amusing thing I've heard all week XD I can't wait to see the result you got, LOL!

I'm still enjoying this, thanks for updating so regularly and hope you feel better soon.
Tigersue
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