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for A New Beginning (DH -COMPLIANT)

by Ms_Figg

person sari_malfoy
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I found this chapter challenging to read because I didn't feel like you did Molly justice. It's potentially very interesting how Molly and Hermione got along post-DH, considering they differ in some aspects greatly (home-maker against someone who is intellectually driven) and there was also that slight coldness way back when Rita Skeeter wrote lies about her and (poor) Harry. Of course Molly has just lost a son and that may be why you see her reacting like this, but personally I see Molly as a quite wise woman. Perfect and faultless, certainly not. I don't know what kind of interaction Molly and Hermione will have later in the story, so I'm looking forward to reading that. A nice start, all the same.
person Susa
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I Love the Story until now!

Amzing Story, consider me as a Fan, Dear!!
schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have read nearly all of your stories and by far this is my favorite. This was a perfect combination of good and bad, ups and downs, or whatever you want to call them. You are truly gifted because you really have a way of pulling the readers into your story like they are truly there. The addition of songs are definately pleasant and I can't wait for more fics written by you. Thanks.
person Susa
schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
[quote]A/N: Sorry JKR...I just couldn't let Snape go out like that. :) [/quote]

Well,

I agree absolutly!!! I was not really happy with the DH - Book! Now, Iam curious about your Story ^^

schedule November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just got done reading chap.51 and i want to smack Hermione silly! What woman with any sense would even give a thought to those garbage quizzes. I thought she was smarter than that. No wonder men think so little of us.
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i loved the story it touched me, made me happy for them both they really got sex hehehe.
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
and oh thaks for saving snape, she cut him a raw deal in the book, and i hated the fact she made him do it all for lily eww yuck. if you asked me she used him!!!! humph
person ljam
schedule November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Bravo, throughly enjoyable...even though we had to wait for 72 chapters for them to finally do the deed, lol. Now you have a whole new cast of characters to write about, and throughly your own! But I just love Snape and Hermonie...you've got them down to a science, so don't abandon them....
person pickyrev
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello,

Oh, how did I get this far and still not get around to giving a review. So far this story is fantastic. Your pacing is just right, moving us along in large chunks where deemed appropriate and slowing down to days where we want the more in depth detail. I love this incarnation of the characters as in many of your other stories, they seem to be exactly the same. I'll be honest, despite the warning, I haven't read book 7( I bought it, but am reluctant to actually read it as I am not sure I want to face the truth of how it ends.)

In the chapter where they are at the internet cafe, I think you might want to change the mouse actions to left clicks unless there is a canon reason to believe that she is left handed and changed the mouse buttons settings from the default where left clicks choose and right clicks bring up the context menu.

Still wondering if you are going to sneak in our favorite vampire duo for laughs.

person ljam
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like Rod, and even though I'm a little impatient with what's happening between Snape and Hermonie, the Stag and Doe interaction has given me hope that things are warming up at last!