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for A New Beginning (DH -COMPLIANT)

by Ms_Figg

schedule October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The title of this chapter says it all...At Last...more still please!!
person Jen618
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ah, yes! delightful. Great that they finally made it that far. Hermione was right, she needed a shag. By the sound of things she will need that sustinance.
person Darque Hart
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ruthie! There's a hole in the bottom of this paragraph and the words have all run out of it...

'... He whispered a contraceptive charm and Hermione felt a tingling. The wizard placed the wand back on the nightstand. Then he kissed her, his ...'

You forgot part of the sentence!!!
person Muffy
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Weeeeee!

Romantic and dreamy, a great pay off.

Thanks!
person Ms_Figg
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks Darque Hart. I needed to take out the "his" Tired.
person Carine
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi Ms_Figg,
I just knew it.I was half through the chapter and I already was sure that they wouldn't do it.....yet.Great chapter however.;P Sureves Epans
person Kate
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ya know, Ruth, you make sex SO GORGEOUS! DO YOU KNOW THAT?!

It is like listening a beautiful piece of music.

Great job. I love every second.
person Anon
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HOT HOT HOT. Great work!! :)
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ms Figg you are a big tease what are you doing to me woman please for the sake of my sanity, let Severus get his way, great chapter. Looking forward to the next chapter
person Muffy
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy man.

Emotions! Naked(literally) honesty!

Damn...brilliant.

Thanks!