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for To Save A Serpent

by CryingCinderella

schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 15 was so heartbreaking! Poor, poor Hermione. But, the way you wrote it was truly amazing! Please continue!
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
TOO TOO SAD
person Anon
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So sad...brought tears to my eyes.
person hpbcn
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
is he really going to die???? c'mon fred came back from the dead!!! you can't leave the poor girl like this.
person lillian9
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I know, I know, you have heard that before... but couldn
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh! you're awful leaving it at that! this story is making me cry.... i wish he didn't have to die!! *sobs*
ok update soon! PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! i LOVE this story!
person Ryu
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I love,love,love this story. Its the best DH applicable( if u can call it that) story out there plus there are lots of lovely lemons ^-^ Just the thing to fight the DH-blues. Just kinda wondering if ur planning on making him alive again. I mean this is great...so sad, yet poignant ...just hoping...
person Ryu
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That other reviewer was right, I also like this story better then Ms_Figgs take on Sevs "death".I feel a tad disloyal writing this but she hasn't even hinted at the slightest spark of atraction between our fave couple and she's well into her chapters already.Shes writing hers when Hermione is somewhere just before forty.I'm sorry but thats just a bit to mature for me. I know wizards can live to be really old yada yada yada but a sixy year old Severus is...slightly wierd and unsetteling.~_~ I mean to say its all right if he's that old at the end of the story but not to start it off...hmmm..so maybe the idea just needs to grow on me or something..
person Meh
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You're killing me here... UPDATE! UPDATE!! UPDATE!!!!
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.