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This was actually very good. Yes, a bit confusing, and I kept excecting him to un-die in the middle. But you've cleared it up very well with the 'last thing' and having them share one more moment together, admitting their love, was beautiful. Very much loved the epilogue, too. really well made

this was a great story. i loved it and she is going to hell for killing off one of the best characters EVER. I have been reading all of your work and i love that all of it is different. you dont run the same plot line with the same problems and the same solutions every story. which i only bring up because other authors with many stories within the same fandom seem to make a habit of it. anyways i love it.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

This is such a sad story! It made me mourn and grieve for Severus all over again...I just couldn't help crying. It's such a well written story and it just worked. I usually don't like stories that go from present to the past and then present to past using flashbacks. But you've done a superb job and it really worked! Usually, I can't stand the stories that incorporate more than two flashbacks but I really have to commend you on a job well done! I also have to applaud sticking to DH and the epilogue, only tweaking it to suit the Severus/Hermione pairing. =) 10/10

This was....so beautifully heartbreaking. I love your writing style and can't wait to read more by you. Thank you for sharing this. You had me crying from the start.

oh crap i cried so hard.

wow that was sad but sweet. i cried at the end, i wish they could have been together but oh well. awesome story i loved it!!


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I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

That was beautiful, truly truly beautiful. I cried a veritable river when it was done( and when I was busy reading it). And don't feel that you're the only one that cried at the end of the book. For about a week after I finished the book I only had to think of Severus as dead and I would start crying. This could be very akward as I would be sitting in my Philosophy class for example while our professor went on about Heidegger or someone equally important and I would suddenly feel the tears coming in my eyes as I thought about Severus gone forever. My friends were quite alarmed that I was crying over philosophy.The same happened in a Linguistics class, it was quite embaressing. Or even over lunch.>_<

Wow, I am sooooo glad that you stuck to yourself. Even if it made all the rabid Give-Severus-Snape-A-Miracle shippers mad. This was a great ending to a great story. And I am so glad that you gave Hermione the strength of character to choose life. I couldn't have written it better, and don't know any other author that could have either. Marvelous job.

PS. Thanks for your reviews on my story! You gave me the motivation to re-hash out the next chapter, which is slowly eatting my soul and will to write... haha