rate_review Reviews

Yay for sub!Harry! Gotta go check out your other stories for more ;-)

Any chance of continuing this one? With maybe Ron and Hermione pretending not to know so Harry has a hard time telling them (while they secretly made bets as to how he would tell them).

oh i disagree...this seems quite nice...though i didn't expect them to be throwing a show for ron and hermione...or they pulled the curtains shut?

I didn't like that second chapter as much as I liked th first either. It seemed as though you lost your muse, your force. It wasn't bad but it wasn't your best either. I say give it a break and giveit another shot. And talk about inviting the devil into the garden eden. Something exciting is bound to happen!

~~Avid Harry/Draco Shipper -Nicole

Don't beat yourself up...I enjoyed it. Just wish there was more.

Yami, come on.
It was delicious and you know it.
Why are you complaining?
I don't even know how to start my piece of smut.
It all turns out stupid and absolutely unconvincing.
I wish I could write it, the way you do!

Harry made out with Severus? Holy smoke! And then that little bit of teasing from him. Is Draco sure about the teasing part? Sooo need chapter 3!