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by volleygirl

person Nathalia
schedule December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok, what is J.R.R Tolkien's elvish (you got a few of the words wrong, by the way) doing in J.K. Rowling's Harry Potter verse.
And don't say that the House Elves use it, that's just wrong.
person saoden
schedule October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story too! you write well, and i like the kind of stories that you write... :D
person hoser41
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story has great potential and I hope that you continue it. I am a big fan of your writing and I am glad to hear that you got past your writers block.
person kcgx23
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous chapter, I love how Harry turned things around on Dumbledore, I can't wait to read more.
person Litta
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it. I know who I hope his date is but I'll wait for you to tell me.Hopefully it will be soon *nudges plot bunnies*
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best stories that I have encountered on this site. Please continue!
person rowinr
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
K i have read this twice now and i may be wrong but i was trying to figure who harrys
date is it is obvious it is not one of the people from the light side so we have to look at the dark
which one i dont now if i missed it but what did harry sign that manuel had second you do state that he winked towards said date at the end of chapter 2 so unless i am mistaken it has to either be blaise who is my first guess or draco i suppose either way great story so far looking forward to your next update.
person Heksy
schedule July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First things first:
In chapter one you mention Bill being in the office as one of the members of the light side and at the same time Bill is out of the office to get Harry.
It is confusing.
And I saw the name Ruphus Scrimegour, but isn't it Rufus Scrimgecour? (not sure about it though)
Other than that?
AB-SO-LU-TE-LY BRILLIANT!!!!