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by Heksy

person NightLo
schedule September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So...a bloody fight has come and gone, without repeating the sad history...well, it seems that elf, though being one of the most intelligent and generous beings, not all are the same...

So...now most of the important people has come, would they bond and become stable soon???
person Nikte
schedule September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story, I was sure I had reviewed at least the last 3 chapters, but for some reason they aren
person Vittani
schedule September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chap. And cant wait to read the next one. N i love my Kermit introduction, lol.
schedule September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 15! History didn't repeat itself! Thank goodness! Harry is pregnant!!!
person NightLo
schedule September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes!!! Update!!! So good!!!

Well, while I just wonder why the fight would stop so soon, you have already taken care of it...however, when will Harry get pregnant? During the bonding? Or before the bonding in the FeyholdMairn??? if...becoming fertile really refers to getting pregnant in the FeyholdMairn - then he would have a fast progress on pregnancy...as you have pointed out...1 day = 10 days...

BTW, how will the white realm celebrates the marriage of two?
person alma
schedule September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow!
schedule September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 14! Very impatient for more! *eg* They are perfect together!
person Heksy
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am going to post it here.
There are obviously some problems with the site.
My chapters are still coming up in bold and the scripting is all wrong.
I already have written an e-mail to the moderators about it.
Sorry people, can't help it.
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet. I mean, Harry was fighting off dominates just so that he could stay with Draco. I am still kind of mad that Harry is not the dominate, but that can't be helped. I hope to read more soon. Keep up the great work.
Kat
person Vittani
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey hun, was brill. The little bit i suggested adding was written perfectly as always, i so love these two. Oh quick thing, the whole chapters in bold, just in case that isnt intentional.