rate_review Reviews

I could tell that English is not your first language but that just means that I am even more impressed that you are doing this well. Because you are doing well, this is wonderful. There is a great deal of original thought and material, very nice indeed. I did have one tiny complaint, though. I wish that you would use the spacing convention of this site. Short paragraphs with double spacing in between. When reading online, it just makes it easier. Thanks.

Just read the story and love it so far! I really hope you start working on the story again!

I for one thought this was a very good story. I read a lot of FF and I have never read one like this. U were more focused on the plot than the sex and that is a good thing don't get me wrong I like sex as much as the next hoe. I hope u go on with this fic bc it is a good one and I want more

I like it a lot!

I really am enjoying this story and am wondering if you will be updating to it.
If so, could you let me know. My email address is
gillyn227@sbcglobal.net

Thanks,
Amortentia4u

I know, but I have waited so LONG for an update, would there be one soon?

Where's the next chapter? lol. A great read I am glad that it was suggested to me. Is that it? Is there no other struggle to be faced? I know the whole Poppy scenario still has to be cleared up. Her mate will be Gabriel, right? How is Poppy the mother is she knew nothing of her heritage? Is there not some ritual that she must go through to accept the position? If I remember correctly from Severus' memory Lily had to accept the position of 'Mother'. I like that you made Severus Harry's father. I love Severitus stories. Keep up the good work. I look forward to the next chapter.

Again, such wonderful story should not be wasted...would you update soon, I am still waiting....please, please, please???

*headdesk* i hope that there is more to this story cuz i realy don't want it to end
oh well i loved the story and wanted to tell you to keep up the great writting
serpensortia
via serpensortia06@gmail.com

Was just browsing the Harry/Draco listings, came across yours and was going to write it off as yet another Draco as a dominant creature over a submissive and smaller Harry. I was surprised as I continued reading the story that Harry actually was as strong and dominant as Draco, even if he was the one to get pregnant (btw, what is it with 17-year old boys getting pregnant? lol). Not to mention having the dreaded Malfoys as King and Queen and Snape as King and Harry's father was cleverly used. The final chapter where not only Harry but Draco undergo their permanent change was excellent as Harry didn't become "effeminate" or anything like that. Liked the hair changes too!