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by elexma

person j
schedule November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic so i was excited when you updated!! THX!! and more soon plz... ducks and frogs so the nursery is gonna have a pond look??? i like that severus is being responsiable enough to want to stay around. thx for entertaining
schedule November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the update! So triplets huh, well why not. I to hope though that you will have Severus as the father, I just think both Hermione and the children would be better of with Severus as the father. I look forward for the next chapter so update soon!!!
person Sirius's_girl
schedule November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So I just read the whole story in one sitting, well two really but that's not the point.
The point is that I have many points right now.
1) I loved it when Hermione slapped Snape! That was great.
2) This is a great piece of fiction. One of the most thought out and well written Remus/Hermione fics I have been able to get my greedy little hands on in quite some time.
3) Two boys and a girl, nice twist there.
4) Can't wait to read the rest.
And last
5) I kinda feel sorry for Remus, passing out and all. Oh well.
person Ox King
schedule November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating your story. I was hoping that it wasn't going to go to the wayside like may others.
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
DUDE! I was screaming when she said that there was a third child. Keep going with the story..Me like! I want more, must have more!

~Talon Longbottom
person jacobsboo
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really really liked it update soon! Oh shit Remus probably pissed his pants! I wished I was there!!
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol that was hilarious, two identical boys... and a girl... lol, you know with concieving like that its actually possibly for snape and malfoy both to be at least one of the kids dad. This was a very good read, ill be hoping to see more soon! =)
schedule October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can not wait for a update on this story... it is really good Your bf had a nice idea why not make it where she is haveing tripletts that was sneaky to bad he did not suggest 2 of each lol
schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update soon!
person ryuuko
schedule September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked your story so far but the whole three-kids-thing is - pardon my french - bloody stupid. To have identical twins and a third kid there has to be two eggs, both fertilized, and one of these eggs has to part to create the identical twins. Both the two-fertilized-eggs and the egg-parting scenario can happen, though it is rare. But to have both happen at the same time? No way. And don't you think that SOMEONE with experience (or even Hermione herself) would have noticed that there is more than one kid? Especially three! Three kids are thrice as large and heavy. I wouldn't be surprised if you would even let them have both Severus AND Lucius as a father. Just to make it even more impossible and unreal.