rate_review Reviews

Love everything about this book except her forgiving her rapists and allowing them near her kids the concept is incredible and so original funny and sweet 

I am quite enjoying this story thus far, though, when Minerva and Remus arrive, who was the third man? Mr. Weasley? I know that Albus and Byron came in, but who is younger...because it was just a bit confusing... Oh well...I can't wait to see what happens next.

You can tell it is a bunch of men surrounding Hermione the way they discuss her situation as though it were the weather or she was not there at all. One would think that Severus would be a little more compassionate if he was really forced, wouldn't you? Love Remus and would want him to take care of me also (even if he blurts out information without her consent). Excellent story. p

Snape comes through and shows that he is human after all. I really hope that at least one of the babies is his. The little girl maybe? p

Boy Snape showed a whole new level of nastiness, didn't he? It was one thing to be "forced" to rape Hermione and a completely different thing to ask AD if he was going to send her and her brat to Lucius if the child turns out to be his. What a creep. He even knew how traumatized she is, which makes him even more of a jerk. A better question would probably be what Lucius will do if he finds out that she is pregnant with his kid (or the dark one since it would be powerful without a doubt). I'm wondering if Remus is going to marry Hermione to protect her from speculation and rumors as well as the outside world. Very excellent so far. p

Oh Boy. Are you going to have Lucius AND Severus both as fathers of the babies? Hmmmm, very interesting. Remus needs to go ahead and marry the girl. Excellent so far. p

I am so glad that you brought Sirius back. I also hated that he got killed, but guess that was to be the impetus for Harry feeling the anger that they thought was necessary to have him go after the bad guys. Story is really good so far. p (sorry I won't be able to comment on each chapter because the site will not let me when I am reading the story all the way through at once.)

Interesting story, though I found the new characters a little distracting as they did not seem very integral to the story line. Also, the time line seems a bit jumbled -- perhaps a paragraph at the beginning of each chapter to denote the passage of time and occurrences therein (as opposed to an author's note) would make the story stronger. I also find it difficult to imagine that Severus' daughter was in the Hogwarts' class three years behind him (as he and Remus were in the same year). I am not a cannon Nazi, but there is a limit to how much I can stretch my imagination (and making Severus 20 or so years older really is a stretch for me because it changes the whole dynamic with the Mauraders, therefore the relationship with Remus and Sirius would have to change). Overall, I would say this story has potential. It was an enjoyable read.

umm there is a chaptor missing since i read this story last time some were between ch 7 and 8 dont know if the site deleated it but the place i read about draco coming in and her fainting is not any where in there

I liked the story, but I felt it was pretty disjointed and confusing. It would be nice if the timing and other characters were explained within the story instead of in author's notes.