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by Slaanesh

person luvhp
schedule December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, that. Was. H.O.T.! Very well done :)
person hfreak
schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. *aplauds* I'd like to see stories of the other relationships you briefly mentioned in this one. That would be pretty cool.
person vampire sawyer
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WHEN THE HELL DID THEY START!
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good short piece please write more longer ones please!!! and thanks for the story
person Zeelthor
schedule July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, while I do have problems seeing Hermione acting like that, you'd never know, of course.

Not a bad piece of fanfiction, although, not a masterpiece either.
schedule July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW !!
person Rob
schedule July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think you should write a story with Harry leading up to this. You meantioned who he had been with and those could be each chapter. But good one, needs a once over by a beta, but good one
person lovette
schedule July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please continue the story
person it is me
schedule July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, your story is so hot. i mean WOW. you need to add more to it. please please