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August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great story so far. Can't wait to see what happens next. And Happy Birthday hope you enjoy the day. :)
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August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Happy Birthday! How old are ya? lol I love this fanfic good job. Here's a present! *holds out cookie and picks off a piece of lint* Sorry it was in my pocket...
~Briar~
~Briar~
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August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great fic - hope to see an update soon.
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August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter! I'm sooo loving this story!!! chocolate kisses to you.
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August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am very interested!! I would love to read more! Fenrir/Harry stories are so hard to come by! Keep up the good work!
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August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you can't end it there... What is remy going to say... does he know?... Well you have to update fast this is geting intresting its hard to find H/F stories that dont potray grayback as a crule wolf that get plesure out of touturing Harry... Well like I said update please :)
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August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter!!!
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August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter! Poor Harry, he must so tramatized by Fenrir! I hope that Lupin doesn't just hand over Harry though. Fenrir has to work for it.
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August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
'do I just have a label stamped
on my forehead saying, trouble here I am, come and get me!'
"oh thats right" laughed Harry bitterly touching the now fading scar, "I do"
Those lines are hilarious. Very creative. And since no one seemed to answer your question on betas I'll tell you. A beta is someone you send your work too. They check over the chapter for any errors, grammatical or otherwise. They'll generally tell you if something sounds wrong or if something is inconsistent with the story. They aren't always used, but they generally are.
on my forehead saying, trouble here I am, come and get me!'
"oh thats right" laughed Harry bitterly touching the now fading scar, "I do"
Those lines are hilarious. Very creative. And since no one seemed to answer your question on betas I'll tell you. A beta is someone you send your work too. They check over the chapter for any errors, grammatical or otherwise. They'll generally tell you if something sounds wrong or if something is inconsistent with the story. They aren't always used, but they generally are.
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August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good, keep up the good work and update soon!