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for The Greyback Legacy

by chochang

person Lex
schedule July 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome,awesome,awesome story! but way to brief so your just going to have to update it.... PLEASE! =P
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I couldn't get past the sex scene because I was howling with laughter. Some choice bits? Remus "suckling" on Tonks' "vagina."

Se-xy.
person ZenythLee
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you have GOT to continue this fic! it is friggin' awesome! and I want more....*puppy eyes* please?
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please please update this soon. It's the start of a great story and I want to see how Tonks Nand Lupin and Sirius and the Healer get together!

Good work!
schedule October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. please don't give up on it its been months since you updated!
person jd sparks
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yea! thanks for two more great installments! and Sirius enters.. hooray!
person Lissa
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That's an interesting and exciting story so far, please continue writing, I like how Remus tries to push Tonks away and her stubborness, you captured both characters very well and the Storyline sounds promising!
Thanks for sharing and making us forget what happenened in book 7!
Lissa
person PadfootMoonySandwich
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Two great chapters. Sorry I didn't get a chance to review chapter 4 before 5 went up. Been a little busy lately. But the chapters were really great. I actually had tears in my eyes when Remus was having his dream about James and Sirius. And yey for Sirius! God that is a sexy piece of work, that is, that Sirius Black!
person jd sparks
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG. I love this fic! more please! it's so fantastic, I'm such a huge Lupin/Tonks fan, and after reading the last book I've been rather depressed. but your fanfic is so uplifting. your vision of what went on behind the scenes is so well rendered, and very believable. you have me convinced that in the world of Lupin and Tonks this is how things happened... and that is a relief, because I really just wanted more Lupin and Tonks. your fic has given me what book 7 didn't... :)
person lupinlover
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for this lovely fanfiction featuring my two favorite characters. Their time was so short. Thank you for giving them more of it.