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July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm still wondering how Lyra fits into everything, I hope she can help find Draco! By the way did you get name Lyra from 'his dark materials'? I love those books! Well I can't wait for the next chapter although this was a bit short. Nicely done!
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July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Hope you email me when the next chapter is up :)
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July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 5!
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July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I felt the same way, my updating will be a bit off now that the book is out and read but I do hope that you return post haste! :)
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July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it's 12:54 AM on july 21, 2007 and i still don't have the book. don't tell me the ending! the story is interesting please update soon *kisses*
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Keep up the story and don't let the 7th book destroy your work on it!
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like where you are going with this.
There are some things that need correcting, though.
The spell is not called legitimacy, but legilimens.
And I noticed your sentences are broken/cut off at odd places. (I don't know the correct English word for it)
It makes it hard to read.
Some spelling errors, nothing big though.
But I will continue to read it.
The fic is promising.
There are some things that need correcting, though.
The spell is not called legitimacy, but legilimens.
And I noticed your sentences are broken/cut off at odd places. (I don't know the correct English word for it)
It makes it hard to read.
Some spelling errors, nothing big though.
But I will continue to read it.
The fic is promising.
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 4! Petunia brought him food? He thought about Draco? Wow!
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for chapter 4! What creature?
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think it's gr8 can't wait to hear more about this lyra(hope I spelt her name right)
girl she sounds interesting I also think it's gr8 that Harry and all the other underage wizards can have their wands and use them in case of protection - he definately needs it from the Dursleys can't wait to read the next chapter.
girl she sounds interesting I also think it's gr8 that Harry and all the other underage wizards can have their wands and use them in case of protection - he definately needs it from the Dursleys can't wait to read the next chapter.