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for Unknotting a String Bikini

by Marti

person Anon
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Goodness, gracious, I need some lemonade, or lemon aid, or to go back to the beach. Fantasy sex on a beach ... so much better than actually trying to figure out how that sand got THERE! Love ya Girl! Thanks for sharing. Pitt
person Kylie
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haha, that was cute, and funny! I really enjoy your writing :)
person kmplease
schedule July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was awesome, and funny can't wait for your next story
person shelagh
schedule July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful as always Marti!!!! Keep up the great work
person Anon
schedule July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow. one of your best.
person Anon
schedule July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow. one of your best.
schedule July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was funny. you should consider a sequel with them swimming in the water. well written, i like the descriptions it makes me want to go to cancun really badly lol
schedule July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow - hot! and I don't just mean the sand! I loved this one, I like Snape being naughty and having some fun. Do you think you could be persuaded to do a few more about their honeymoon, just for fun especially that one with the see through bikini. That sounds like it would be really good!
person Anon
schedule July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very short and sweet story. Snape? On the beach? In a tight little bathing suit? My fantasy come true. I really enjoyed it. Please write some more.