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...really, what a new definition of action...

A Foxxy little read! Oh no dear i am afraid i must disagree. This is a full blown gigantic wolf of a read! This is definitely one of the best things i've read in a long time. I love the relationship between Harry and Draco, i think its going to be a very interesting relationship. I always think that in a relationship the sub is the more powerful and dangerous because they've got to protect their young. Anyway i think this is brilliant the banter between Voldie and Dumbles was truly well written. I dont think you really need a beta i saw very few spelling or grammar mistakes but if you feel you need one, i'd love to do it. Email me if you want, if you'd prefer someone else then thats fine too. But dont in anyway think your writing is let down by bad grammar and spelling. I have read some truly appalling fics and this definitely isnt one of them.

Vittani@aol.com

p.s. Can't wait for the next update!

Well done again! I love their methog of "shaking hands". Kind of feel bad for Hermione- makes you want to slap Ron until he notices her.

Hmmmm, somehow I don't think Ron's going to care if Harry and Draco are together. Since he is together with Draco's BEST FRIEND.

Dang this is hot keep hot up. Also I can't wait for the ministry attack.

Well that whole dog bit was quite interesting. I hope you update soon. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.

Now...... laughing might not have been the way for Draco to go there. He may not like the result of that. 1) Harry will be mad 2) Harry is at the time a dog.....that could bite him in the butt!

What just happened? Or rather why did it happen? I sooo need chapter 5!

Interesting story so far. I'm glad to see that Harry isn't being a pushover as a submissive. I usually prefer a more equal relationship (regardless of mates and the Dom/Sub situation) especially if one partner is inexperienced. Please remember that being a Sub doesn't mean they don't top during sex sometimes. Update again soon?

Huh? Vellas could do that ?
or was that Harry?
CAnt wait for mrore :)
Update soon