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Well, the spell was...dark, I must admit...it really seemed those that Lucius Malfoy would use to connect and control Narcissa, in fear of others' advancement and infidelity...(though I highly doubted would that happen)...

However, the love of Blaise is so deep, would you explain how that has developed? We knew about some of Ron's feelings, but how about Blaise? And what is Blaise? A dragon? And does Ron know about that?

Lastly, for those that said not loving the idea of submissive Harry, I would like to say...there are many to support your idea. And submissive (in bed) is not equal to weak/fragile, it is just a show of love...maybe there should read more about Japanese comics and fictions, they have great definition of aggressive submissive - and that was really hot!!!

Please update soon!

I really enjoyed that! Well done again.

Ooh the plot thickens. I really liked that. Too often characters like Blaise and Ron have no depth, but these two had more than depth hun. Brilliant chapter definitely cant wait for the next one.

Then why was Blaise pointing a wand at him? Sooo need chapter 7!

I am really enjoying this story. I hope you continue with it and tell us what Blaise is. You hinted that he was something, but you didn't tell us what, or was I just reading into that a little to much. Keep up the great work.
kat

Wow, I absolutly love your fanfiction. I wish that one day I can write like you but sadly I don't think I am at that level just yet. I just started my new and first fanfiction ever so yeah. ^^ I am happy since I have recieved 7 reviews already so I guess that is good. Sorry if you think if this is a weird request but by any chance can you be my beta? If yes can you drop me a review saying that you can and if no I understand*nods and hugs* Oh, here is a cookie*Hands one to you* For a job well done. ^^

I don't see things that way either! When everything comes out, and he finds out they are all working together to save Harry, maybe he will see it a different way. They are working to save Harry...right?

Sooo need chapter 6! That is some way to shake hands!

I am really enjoying your story. I like the mixture of humor, romance and drama.

What are you looking for in a beta? I'm good at spotting plot holes and spelling mistakes. If you want that kind of beta, you can e-mail me at beautifulvoice at gmail dot com.

-Lily

Update soon