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March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
what about Grindelwald? wouldn't he be up there on the wall? and i'd think he'd have something to say to Dumbledore.
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March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love the chapter, love the fact the snakes and griffs are working together to save their own ass.
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March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay you updated. Other than some double negatives in your writing it's wonderful.
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March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What is wrong with Harry? Soooo need chapter 14!!!
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March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's Lucius, not Lucious!!!
It's Zabini, not Zanbini!!!
It's auror, not aurora!!!!
Also, you constantly use "its" when you ought to be using "it's" there is a difference you know! I apologize for seeming so harsh but all of my pet peeves have ben hit in a couple of chapters! Well, that aside I'm really loving this plot line, I'm only on chapter 8 right now but I will continue reading.
It's Zabini, not Zanbini!!!
It's auror, not aurora!!!!
Also, you constantly use "its" when you ought to be using "it's" there is a difference you know! I apologize for seeming so harsh but all of my pet peeves have ben hit in a couple of chapters! Well, that aside I'm really loving this plot line, I'm only on chapter 8 right now but I will continue reading.
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March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Eh.. I kind of feel like you're pulling in too many different sub-plotlines with so many characters, but that could just be because the Draco/Harry parts are so hot. ;D I'd love to see more emphasis on them and their relationship.
Two things:
1. Auror, not Aurora. The plural is simply Aurors (again, not Aurora/Auroras)
2. Zabini, not Zanbini or Zambini
Looking forward to more.
Two things:
1. Auror, not Aurora. The plural is simply Aurors (again, not Aurora/Auroras)
2. Zabini, not Zanbini or Zambini
Looking forward to more.
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March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sooooo need chapter 13!!! Oh this is bad!!! Poor Amelia! At least she's with Cedric now!
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March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooooo sooooo need chapter 12!!!
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June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh!!! Not good! I sooo need chapter 12!!
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June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm in love withyour story! Grammer faults and all. It's very enticing! More soon? *begs* I just found it and I don;t know how often you update. I read about your health scare and Hugs to you!