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add an epilogue!! add a bazillion chapters!! i really liked it!! it was so freakin good and angsty and ugh...wonderful!! well done!

that was the best ive read all night long!!

Please make more chapters this is really good

This was super good! I loved it. I so wasn't expecting for Harry and Rond to be dead at the end and everything. Well I would definatly read the epilogue if you write one or even if you decided to make it into an actual story.

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that was just confusing...I liked the whole premise about Draco making Hermione watch Blaise and Pansy but it felt like you tried to get too much into the story. I think it would have been better if you hadn't added the bit with Lucius and saying all her friends were did because it didn't really make sense. One minute she's doing patrol and all is well, ten minutes later all her friends are dead and she's at Malfoy Manor?Hmm I didn't buy it, but the lemons were good you had a ton of spelling mistakes though just off the top of my head I think when you meant to say 'shut' you actually have 'shit'

did =dead sorry tired :D

Loved it!

Jayna
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Please make this into a very long story, don't stop. I don't think I have ever read a story that has Hermione at Malfoy Manor as Draco sex slave. That would be so hot. I loved the way you wrote this story so I know you would do a great job. Think about doing it please.

well, that was one hell of a total whim.
Done very well. Very exciting and Hot!
Too bad it's a one shot. Could be very interesting living in Malfoy's bed. Hee Hee

Love it. Very dark, would love to know what would happen in an epilogue.