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for A Beautiful Lie

by GryffinLilly

schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's ok that the chapters are short, just don't forget about us readers who really want to read the next chapter!! Very good!
person Selera
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey you are still doing well.. but where is Harry's wand.. the fact he doesn't have that is bad.. of course if the stuff was destroyed oh boy. You are still doing well and I look forward to the next part.
person anniea
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i just read the author note and it's okay. i don't like the short chapters but i will deal with it right? right! update soon btw did harry's (using the term loosely) family do anything sexual to him? *kisses*
person roni004
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LIKE SO FAR
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good beginning I'd love to read more hopefully longer chapters
person Selera
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good cause I'm curious about this story now.
person anniea
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow it was short but wow! update soon *kisses*
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice start!! Are there going to be any little flashbacks in the other chapters to fill in some clues?
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ya better!!! (jokes) nothing better than a snarry tale involving a sev that looks after a beaten dursley-down-trodden harry. waiten for next chapter. update soon!!