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for No Longer Naive

by Clare1984

schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 1-5: Well, I think that was one of the longer PWPs I've read. I'm mostly indifferent to Remus and I usually don't even like Sirius, but this story certainly gave the reader a full measure of hot sex, no matter who was giving and getting. Hermione was a generous, uninhibited female settling what could have been a tricky, jealousy-laden situation into a loving threesome instead. Win-win-win. Nicely done. Wall-to-wall-to-wall sex awash with shared juices mostly in Hermione's orifices. I could even have welcomed a peek at Remus chastising Sirius with a little hole-in-one. They are a slash couple anyway in this story. Steamy sex with a few ruined shirts LOL!
person Anon
schedule November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person hgelman
schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whew - That was great! So glad you updated...and now, I think I need a cigarette.
person luvhp
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YEAH!!!! Oh dear, that was PERFECT. Bloody Brilliant the way you took one little scene and stretched it into such a sensually driven climax! Damn girl, you rock!
Okay, my update is up for C,C,C! I actually have part of Ch. 16 already written, I was on a role and guess what...there's actually some lovin' in this one, been awhile ;)
Happy Friday!
person luvhp
schedule October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Come on girl, let's have it, gotta see what happens in that thar kitchen with two lusty wizards and an extremely horny witch who by the way gets to have like 3 orgasms every time, no fair! lol.
:)
person luvhp
schedule October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Clare, email me if you'd like. Would love to bounce some ideas off ya...and hints to the next storyline, you KNOW it's D/Hr, LOL.
twelshans@hotmail.com
person Anon
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMGosh that was so HOT!!!!! Please write more soon!!!!
person luvhp
schedule September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You tease!!!!
BTW< thanks :) SO sweet of you.
And a very HOT chapter indeed. So, working kinda backwards, I like that. Going to back to when they all got together. And the kitchen scene, HELL YES! Sex on the kitchen table is freckin' HOT! Hmm, makes me think about... oh, never mind, not gonna tell, HaHa. I'd better get to work, Dramione is calling (or is that moaning I hear?). It is Friday and you know how I love to Update on Friday! ;)
Keep up the eternall hotness over here!
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful timing with Remus and Sirius taking control of her *grin*. Those three are just fab-u-lash together. So much passion and desire- both of which you brought beautifulllllllly to the surface!
Can't wait for an update!