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for A Touch of Evil

by Avangeline

person MrGalion
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More that was Awsome
person Jan
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! That was a nice twist to the story, pairing Severus and Voldemort for now. I hope Severus through out time learns to like and care for Harry if not as a father does a son then maybe like a godfather does his godson? I just feel that Harry needs someone to care for him, like a fatherly presence.

But it does worry's me a little when Harry grows up and understand what's it mean when Severus returns from a meeting smelling of Tom. Seeing that this is a H/V story, I wouldn't want them to hate each other, we already have lots of story like that. Anyway please update soon.
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good story write more, I liked Severus and Tom together.
person Selera
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes this is very well done. I look forward to the next chapter.
person Vittani
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooh sev n voldie, hot hot hot. seriously am addicted now, please write more the moment you can.
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great beginning, I love it so far. Severus and Voldemort are hot together. So are Harry and Voldemort. Will the three of them end up together? I hope so ;D
I won't miss Ginny ;) Dumbles really is a horrid man, isn't he?
I'd love to read more soon!
person Jan
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting! So far, I am intrigued. Please update soon :D
person Kaitlyn
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love the story so far.
nice twist making Ginny die.
i HATE her which makes me love this story even more.
i can't wait till Harry and Tom get together!
hehe.
person Selera
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn I think this is going to be good.
person Vittani
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, i like this. I definitely want a new chapter. Dont think i've seen this take before.