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for Hidden Love

by Mouse2212

person Alice
schedule December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I hope you update this one soon!!! I really like it.
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow I loved that chapter it was soooo amazing!!! I can't wait for the next one to come out...I hope Bellatrix comes back after she said that!!!!!

KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!

~Jessy~
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Alright..I must admit..at first I wasn't that into...Bellatirx Lestrange and Remus Lupin????

But I LOVE IT...omg I LOVE it soo much it's awesome. I hope you keep writing this one; it's really great...Im just a little miffed that this last one was tonks...ok..i lied...kinda really miffed..but it's still really good. I just hope Tonks doesn't get any wrong ideas..or maybe that's the direction you're going for??
Either way..keep it up. It's awesome.
person MamiEI4U
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it! It's the ultimate love hate relationship!
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Review for chapter 1

Oh, wow. Oh, wow! AUUUUGH! This pairing is never something I'd read (I never really read Remus anyone, not even the infamous Remus/Sirius).

But HOT DAMN. This is fucking gorgeous! Now I have to read the rest! Oh my god! Bella/Remus?! You've made it so fucking hot! I love it! OMG. It's a very daring, insane pairing, but my oh my...his thoughtfulness, his tenderness, with her wildness.....FUCK yes. Hot stuff.

Oooh. I'm going to like this. I've always liked brunettes with blondes! Yumm.
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD. You brought in TONKS?! ;jafd;jafdjadfljfholyfuckingshit.

COMPLICATIONS! Jeeeeeezus. Wow. You are daring. I applaud you! THis is fucking awesome! I like daring! HP can be a bore without the daring. That's why Harry/Draco is so hot sometimes, that daring spirit.

Remus/Bella is even MORE daring! Hot damn! I think you've got me onto this pairing, too! And the way you character Remus and Bella - SO spot on to how I imagine their thinking would be, in my head.

The First TIme totally made sense. It had tomake sense to really bring this fic together, and you totally made it work. Fantastic job. Figures Bella would be a masochist. And WHAT a hardcore masochist! Her loving the pain, and him swearing ...yum. You're starting to give me ideas for my masochist OC.

Anywhooo...lovely chapter 2. SO great! I like how they're influencing each other, and the last bit. "long black hair. Shit" or some such....ahaaahahaaa! Funny!

I'll keep reading. :D
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, shit! Arthur saw the door shaking!

Uh-oh.

Oooht, the conflict, the tension...exciiiting. !! Remus is fucking hot in this fic. I like his animal side. I think that's why I haven't been much attracted to Remus fics before - he's so docile, and Sirius was so un-docile it got a bit obnoxious at times. But this Remus, yum! I like it. He's still quiet and shy, but at the same time, he isn't....sometimes. :D haahaaa.

Anyway, great chapter 3. Can silencing charms block squeaking sounds? 'cause if not, then wouldn't whoever is in the room below Remus hear? Or the floorboards would shake....XD

I hope there are more than 3 chapters. if not, please update!

Damnit, you've totally distracted me from work. >_<
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"He borrowed a phrase from Ron." "Bloody Hell."


XDDD HILARIOUS!


I almost wondered if "Gabriella" is Bella in disguise...but nah, I think Remus would recognize her.

Poor, unwanted Tonks!! :(

...I thought of Book 7 briefly while reading this and had a boohoo moment....almost stopped reading...but then I took a deep breath and continued reading. Glad I did!

When I'm done with chapter 5 or 6, whichever is last, I'm going to say - update! This fic deserves way more reviews!
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
review of chapter 5

oh my god! She lied! crap!


YOU MUST update! PLEASE!!! I really want to know what happens next!!
person jemlia
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I didn't know if i liked the pairing at first but i did like forceful Remus very, very much. (He He He!) More?