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for Always On My Mind

by Gryffindorclutz

schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like Hermione sticking to her guns in Chap. 2
person Anon
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes, yes, yes! Hermione read my mind. I'm glad Draco determind to get his witch back. Just
don't make it to easy for him. I'm glad Hermione's staying strong. She's lioness after all.
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Atomic_Kitten
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to say I enjoy the plot of this story its different at last and I like when there older then in there 7th year so yep good job =)
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story so far!
I liked the idea of them being involved but broke it off, you don't see that very much at all in D/Hr fanfiction.
Keep up the great work =)
person Anon
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the plot. The thing I didn't like, and agree with Draco, is the reason for breaking up with
Hermione. I'm glad Hermione didn't get emotional with Draco. He was kind of conceited thinking
she was going to stick around while he 'explores the other side of the fence' :(
Ron and Hermione? Not my favorite couple, but at least know Draco feels what he threw away for just some
cheap shags and lose women. I really love the plot. I wonder how they're going to get together, if Hermione's with Ron.
Sorry if you see any grammar mistakes. I'm off to work.
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Atomic_Kitten