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for Always On My Mind

by Gryffindorclutz

schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for fixing the paragraphs, it looks much better now and it is easier to read. I love what you are doing with the story so far. It is very interesting and Hermione is being a very stubborn witch. Love the story hun, great job and I can
person wicraven
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love dra/her fic's and adore this story, the paragraph's could be spaced out a bit more though. (please don't take as a flame, I fucking detest flamers!!!!), I really like were your going with the story so far, keep it up alldabest Ang xx
person Elbe
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I have got to admit, this is extremely well written, and update soon. You are leaving me on the edge of my seat since the first sentence of this story. I will keep my guesses for another time, however I just can't help but wonder if these two will fall for one another with Blaise's help and whoever Hermione's best friend is. May be Ginny? *Shrugs* just update soon.

Elbe.
person Anon
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hermione can't let Draco treat her like that, as if she would let herself be treated like that.
I can really imagine Smith's stunned face. You go Hermione. As for Draco he doesn't have
a right to walk into Hermione's life demanding things from her and commanding her. I think
he should he teased a little by our Hermione. Other than that, I enjoyed this chapter a lot.
I really hope you update soon.

Atomic_Kitten
person Anon
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please write more its really good
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon i love it more please.
person wicraven
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks
person Anon
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfully written! Please update!!
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the first chapter a lot--that point when you realize you screwed up big time. It'd be great if you can add blank lines between paragraphs.

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