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for Always On My Mind

by Gryffindorclutz

schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person kittycat30
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY Draco realizes what he did! I hope he tells Hermione! Can't wait for more!
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter, I hope he doesn't leave her again!!!!! Please update soon!!!!!
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now Draco's getting the right idea!

The section on her relationship with Ron was beautiful.
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY! You updated...so happy! Update again soon. Love the story!
person Anon
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update this is an amazing story. I don't want Hermione to leave the manor but they really need to talk through their issues. I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn you. You made me go back through all the previous chapters to see if he ever said "I love you" before.

I like how Padma and Ernie think it's cute that he takes Hermione to lunch everyday. I also like that Hermione hasn't settled into her old routine and is still holding some of herself back.

And I really want a Julian of my own . . .
schedule August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Alright,
So I just finished reading what's posted of this story && I have to say,
I'm really liking it.
I was a little aprehensive at first because I haven't read many marriage law fics before,
&& some of the ones I have read just don't seem believable.
But this one does because Hermione's not magically inlove with him out of nowhere,
&& Draco isn't that overly possessive && creepy like some people portray him.
It's believable that he has real feelings for Hermione,
Which is what I tend to be picky about.
I can't wait for the next chapter,
Please update soon.

Much Love...
XXX
Xx-.k.a.y.y.-xX
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i luv this fic! u do a great job writing it, I just wish u would write ur chapters just a little longer. Anyways great job and can't wait for more
person Cheile
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very neat premise! will there be more/a sequel? i'd love to see when the baby is born.