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for Always On My Mind

by Gryffindorclutz

person Anon
schedule December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person luvhp
schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!! WHat abeautiful, heartbreaking story. Sad about Ron and the baby, but real life isn't ever perfect, so why should fanfic??
Anyway, you wrote the delivery part very well, I was a baby and had an epidural. The other two were C-sections, so I didn't feel a thing, until the next day, LOL.
Loved the ending, yeah, she loved him and always did!!!!!
person wudelfin
schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
quite a cute story, I really love the way you explained the relationship btwn r/h. simple to the point and uncomplicated
person Anon
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Such a great story!!!!!!!
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i loved it!
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What an absolutely excellent story and such a beautiful ending. Hope you write many more!!! luv Angxx
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very sweet. i enjoyed reading this.
person mhaj78
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Truly beautiful! Thanks so much for a great story.
person kittycat30
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Thanks for the happy ending!
person kazfeist
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just a note on the latest chapters of Always on My Mind and Pictures. Both progressing nicely. Hopefully th happy ending in both with be soon. Great stories, albeit in different worlds. :D