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for Always On My Mind

by Gryffindorclutz

schedule May 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was a nice tale.
schedule January 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
If we didn't know that it was Draco that we are talking about, we might think it is the "real life stalker" stories that are made into Lifetime TV movies. He really does seem to mean well. He has just never been taught how to behave. HG has her work cut out for her. Enjoying the story. p
schedule January 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is getting sad. Does Draco not notice that she always uses past tense when talking about her good/loving feelings towards him? Add that to the fact that he is facing that he basically forced her to be with him, and he is going to have a full blown anxiety attack and somehow feel that he needs to release her so she can be happy. Poor Draco. p
schedule January 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Excellent, even if I did cry through the last two chapters (and as I write this). I love when characters are actually honest with each other as I don't really have patience for the games people play. It is a very sweet story and an enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing. p
person Ankhesen
schedule November 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Darlin'...

I like you introduce major twists in an almost casual way. I did NOT see them coming! Awesome, awesome!
person mlui
schedule April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a fabulous story. I'm glad Draco realises Hermione's feelings are above his and is willing to let her go. And I'm glad she stayed and they cleared everything up. I really liked the part about trading gold for bronze. That was a brilliant line. =)
person amsev
schedule December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sigh! Lovely take on the MLC a la DM/HG!
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really really loved this!
person kazfeist
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, what a lovely change from the feelings generated by Sold! I truly like this type of ending better, even though Draco was still a bit of a conniver in this one. I also like the lesson that he learned: the happiness of the one you love is more important than your own. It's always wonderful if that emotion is reciprocated, isn't it? Thanks for the story, and for the ending. :D
person kazfeist
schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, I'm glad I read to the end of it....and sorry that AFF.net doesn't have a story alert feature, so that I could have found out about the updates sooner. Lovely story, and I like your Draco very much. He knows what he wants (finally!) and doesn't stop until he attains it. :D