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God! Mary Jane, I love your reviews! You really have a sense for these kind of things, don

Hi again MaryJane!
I thought I have to reply here now, before I write another essay analysing my story and bore people lol.
Thanks for showing so much interest though! I love discussing these things!
About the crucio, I was looking for some kind of punishment that she would really find no kind of pleasure in, so a real punishment. I want Lucius to remain a real threat. There is a difference between certain things he makes her do to humiliate her for his own pleasure and fun and real and pure punishment he uses only because he feels she really deserves it and not as part of a game, -and I also needed something that suited Lucius.
I somehow don

Thank you for your generous reaction, that was shredding some interesting lights on a few things. Like your view on Snape, wich I think is completely right. He really is not that

poor girl she has dug herself in way too deep, if she got pregnant Lucius would probably kill her.

I'm reviewing this one because it hasn't been updated in the Snape/OFC section.

More evil Lucius! Yay! But seriously though, you made him evil. Compassion? Never. Mercy? He doesn't even know the meaning of the word. But I'm not complainig, honestly. That just means more brutal, dominating, kinky Lucius sex. Which is great.

He wouldn't even listen to her explanation about the bracelet... the stupid, blonde, sexy git.

I can see that Kristy is getting sucked in though, that desire to please that comes with being someone's slave. Can you say stockholm syndrome?

Anyways, je t'aime le