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for The Pains of Becoming

by Audrey

person Kmiles
schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
eekk!! add more very well done =D
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
keep writing.
person MaryAnn
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting chapter, I which we see a bit more of how Kirsty sees herself and others. I love how rich a character she is.

She
person Audrey
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi everyone!
I just wanted to say that Sajahi, my lovely Beta will be very busy for a while and I was wondering if someone here would be interested to take over for her, either temporarily or finally?
If anyone is interested and feels up to the task, please let me know. ;)


person MaryAnn
schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another sexy chapter! Yay! I love it when they fuck (don
person MaryAnn
schedule October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Makes you wonder what kind of father Lucius is towards his son, for Draco seems almost as desperate for his attention as Kirsty somehow. I can certainly imagine Lucius being a cold and distant father because he thinks it the
person MaryAnn
schedule September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM

Wow, good chapter, I liked it a lot. It really flowed somehow. I think you
person MaryAnn
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi Momo, thanks for reviewing the review:)! I have an answer written and though it
person Audrey
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi MaryJane,
I understand and would love to talk some more. e-mail me at audreycooper@hotmail.de
person MaryAnn
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was eagerly awaiting your update and it was indeed a very interesting chapter. You promised it would explain a bit about the background of the story and it certainly does. I felt really sorry for Kirsty tho, she seems tired and traumatized, and no girl should have to go through what she goes through. Lucius is such a cold, unfeeling bastard, even if he