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for The Pains of Becoming

by Audrey

person MaryAnn
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was an intense chapter
person MaryAnn
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(I know, horribly late
person MaryAnn
schedule January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi Momo,

Thanks for the reaction! And I completely understand why you felt Snape could not take her, having this VERY sexy threesome Lucius/Kirsty/Snape, for I also have strong feelings about how certain actions or re-actions ruin every chance for future relationships that aren
person Audrey
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MaryJane: I always love to read your thoughts about the development of the story!
Chapter 17 was one of my personal absolute favourites, and funny you should say that you were almost disappointed that Snape didn
person MaryAnn
schedule December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM

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Wow, fast updates! You
person zariva
schedule December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Uhhh, two new chapters in such short succession! What a wonderful Christmas present! :)
I'm glad to see you've finally found a new beta and their doing a wonderful job! Definitely looking forward to you continuing your great work!

Riva.
person Audrey
schedule December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for reviewing!
I am glad I could do my share for your Christmas experience ;)
At least one more chapter will be up before New Year, maybe more if I am lucky ;)
person MaryAnn
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I always like the complications slash possibilities that Polyjuice gives, it
person Audrey
schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much, Ordinarywickedwitch!

BTW, just using the chance to let people know.... I'm still needing a beta! :)
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was an amazing chapter. You did a great job with Kirsty's emotions and her belief that she is meant to serve Lucius. It was very believeable.

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