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Well, now I

Well, what should I write? Kind and not so kind things. First of all, your Kirsten is a terrible Marry Sue, so like: All my dirty dreams are woven in her life. And now coming to the better part: It's terribly hot! Not so much the plot part, I've no sympathy for any DE-Worshiping, but I do understand you if you find Lucius sexy-because he is it. Until now, I'm quite happy with the story. So: Keep on going. As for the future: try to stick to the existing characters, there are enough of them. For all it

Hi Visitkarte,
thanks for you review! -I guess.
Very interesting what you have to say, I am pleased you enjoy the story and of course reviews can be negative as much as positive. Though some of what you said does not make any sense in my mind so I would like to answer your review if you don

I am torn at the moment. I want to see how it ends, but at the same time, I don't want it to end at all! Like I said before, an absolutely phenomenal story... Any plans for others fics after this one wraps up?

I didn't mean to imply that Pensive Plotter wasn't doing a FABULOUS job. But my offer still stands for this and and other story you might need beta-ed, if the wonderful Plotter isn't able to help out.

Keep writing! I can't wait to read more!!

I agree with MaryJane, you should change it in the last chapter from leather, to a description that is more in line with the gold medallion. I also agree that her name

I think you should know that your story is the best damn thing that I have read in a long time. I love it with a passion and when I see that it's been updating I get soooo excited.

I do want to point out however that there is a small blooper that probably not many have caught...At the end of the last chapter, it says Lucius presses something small and leathery into her had, and yet the medallion is metal and on a chain. Just throwing it out there.

And if you ever need a new beta, lemme know. would love to do it for you, though Pensive Plotter is doing a fine job of it. I look forward to reading more soon!

Momo

Ch 29: The meeting with Dumbledore

oh I am so happy for an update thank you!!

I am loving every minute of this story. I really like your style of writing for the sexual scenes.