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The story was really great all the way through....except the epilogue at the end of the story. To be honest the epilogue could have been better. I am disappointed with the ending it the story. A sequel for this story would be great.

Hey DoS! Nice to see that someone dug out my old story and enjoyed it! That really makes me happy!

Sorry I am letting you hanging with "Black-eyes Girl". I am almost done with the 20th chapter. I hav an eventful week and did not have so many quiet evenings suitable for fan fic writing :) But it's on the way!
Thanks for all the support! Momo

WOW!! This story was incredibly addictive, I just couldn't stop reading. Spine tingling, shiver sending, gut clenching tale with all the graphic detail that readers such as myself love. Snape was amazing, Lucius delightfully evil and Kirsty was a character I could relate to although there were times where I wanted to slap her (least Snape did a good job of that lol) but it all worked out in the end yay!

Hope to read more of your work! :D

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Hi Pensieve Plotter!
Sorry, I hope you did not think I was angry with you or something because that is absolutely not the case! I am very grateful for your work on previous chapters. In fact I am very grateful to everyone who helped me out! This story has had many different betas and I appreciate all their work and I am very aware that you spend your time to fix my story without expecting anything in return. And I know real life comes first.

I agree with you that chapter 35 is one of the most depressive chapters. On a positive side, I think it is very likely that she will be able to feel again in the future. But there was no other way for her than to turn numb to get through that gang rape.

I am glad you understand what I was trying with Draco. I was not sure if people would get it when he says that he cannot leave, when he realises his father wants to kill her. In the same way I don

To Momo:

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@Visitekarte: are you German yourself? Your username sounds like it.
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Yes I am still available. E-mail me at Prissylilchica@gmail.com anytime, I check my e-mail constantly so if you send the chapters to me just remember to put them in RTF...

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(late, I know, sorry!)

Ch 32: Intens chapter. I

Ch 33&34:

Ouch. This surely does feel bad

I have recently heard that Reviews are becoming a problem namely with never ever ever being done... Well in that case I am writing reviews for all the stories that I read read to tell you how much I apprecheate and do LOVE your writing you are actually on a book marked list that I check every day and get VERY excited when I see new postings... with that said I must slip to the obligatory I WANT NEW CHAPTERS DAMN YOUS!!!! WE'RE ALMOST GETTING TO THE END BUT ALMOST ONLY COUNTS IN HORSE SHOES AND HANDGRANADES!!!