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April 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I enjoy your story with quite a few twist. The title Brown Eyed Girl smells Hermione Granger, only to find out that she is someone else, thought not too unlike HG. Putting her (Sandra) in Hufflepuff is also quite unexpected. The only thing I wish is to see more dynamics developing between Servius and Sandra.
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September 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I particularly loved how your OC was a very remarkable Hufflepuff yet still a nonentity. Wonderful twist, that. Hufflepuffs far too often are the target of jokes from the other Houses (canon and fanfic alike) so it was awesome for them to have something so special as it being a Blessing or even a Special Power to be able to blend into the background and remain unseen. A rather brilliant take.
Thanks for writing.
Thanks for writing.
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August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG I love how she challenged him!!! THat was sublime! You didn't ask, you told me. :) That's brilliant, dear, brilliant.
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August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My apologies in the delay of reviewing this one, but I've wrapped up in my own story writing at the moment, hehe Anyway, Severus is his usual self, wanting and not liking to be refused~ haha I love it. I am on to the next chapter now :P
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August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What an evil cliffie! Just when he finally finds her you stop. I do believe you do need to write another chapter!At least one more? Please!
Sansa
Sansa
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August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Silly me, there are several more chapters- must go read them!
Sansa
Sansa
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July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch2: Very nice; he's so Snapey, isn't he, just assuming she wants to marry him etc. right away.
But she said no to him! She's unnatural, lol.
But she said no to him! She's unnatural, lol.
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July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just read Chapter One and will definitely be making time to read the rest.
Great so far - I like Severus being the great war hero, pursued everywhere by lust-crazed witches (and letting a few of them catch him too). I'm looking forward to his next meeting with the mysterious Finn. Will read & review some more tomorrow.
Great so far - I like Severus being the great war hero, pursued everywhere by lust-crazed witches (and letting a few of them catch him too). I'm looking forward to his next meeting with the mysterious Finn. Will read & review some more tomorrow.
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July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've reas the first chapter already, just making my way through. I am heading to work soon so I don't have time to read it all, but I am loyal to you Ms. ccino!!! :) So you will always hear what I think :)
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July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A great story! I loved Severus being determined to have Sandra immediately, being thwarted and ending up all out of sorts and getting drunk with Remus *snicker*
I really enjoyed reading this. Thanks!
I really enjoyed reading this. Thanks!