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June 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I thought that this fanfic was absolutely fantastic until the last two chapters. It was like someone different took over writing the story. I loved the direction the story was going but then all of a sudden it did a 180 turn. I'm hoping you will continue with this story and that things start to get back on track. I really do admire your work and I'm going to look at your profile to see if you have written any more like this. Thank you =)
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April 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
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April 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
He felt it safe to approach her, but covered his front carefully. Hermione petrifying the doll had unfortunately left his erection intact, but left the rest of him able to move. Great, a frozen penis. Thank you, Hermione Granger. Who said you were the 'star pupil' for nothing?
does that mean he cant pee because his penis is frozen from her spell?? why doesn he undo her spell on himself but not on the doll OBVIOUSLY!!!
does that mean he cant pee because his penis is frozen from her spell?? why doesn he undo her spell on himself but not on the doll OBVIOUSLY!!!
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April 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD EWWWW THE HEADMASTER WAS WATCHING THEM?? HOW LONG FOR???
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April 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
please tell me that chapter 11 ISNT the end of this BRILLIANT story!!! MMMMMMMMM am so turned on by Severus Snape!!!!
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April 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
what doing on?? is this a dream? why is she thinking about this blond guy fabio when she is with snape???
Chapter 9: Delusions...Tick...of...Tick...Grandeur...Tick...
The smell of grass and earth engulfed Hermione
Chapter 9: Delusions...Tick...of...Tick...Grandeur...Tick...
The smell of grass and earth engulfed Hermione
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August 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OH DEAR SWEET MERLIN!!! I haven't laughed that hard in soooo long!!!!! You simply MUST continue!!! I love it! I love love love love loooove it!!! Write more!!!
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July 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ok, this is funny as hell and a lot creepy with the doll and such and last but not least really hot!!!
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July 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I could not stop laughing! Merlin's Balls, that was hilarious! Your story is quite inventive, even if the characters are a little ooc, and for a first time lemon, I'd say it's more than decent. Please keep updating!
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July 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ha! Love it!