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for The Great Below

by aldallia

schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HMMM interesting. I wonder what's going to happen with Bill and Caroline. Update soon.
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmmm interesting...poor girl *grimaces* blech having to stay with the malfoys
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol i'm torn really it's a really interesting fic...though the age differnce makes feel all queasy inside but it's so well writen i'm just going to have to keep reading. heh all in all nice job
person blackswan
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update this soon!! i need the next chapter : D .. you are a very good writer .. *aka: your fanfic has plot* ... thank you ^_^
person Kelly
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MOAR!
person Writemore,please
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love how there hasn't been any actual sex yet, but the fantasies are so hot that they're enough to keep me reading. Please post more ASAP!
person Anon
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, interesting! But why is Hermione mentioned?
person Anon
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it.
person lizziek
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really fun story so far - I can't wait for her Summer at Malfoy Manor and Lucius' special instruction. Ummmm.... yeah.

I think having Bill in this is fun - I don't think I've read many stories that featured him in all his Weasley hotness. Cute.

Snape... ahhh... sexie Snape. More detentions, please! Surely Filch will loan him a few of those whips Snape's got his eye on. ;p

Looking forward to more of this story. She's a pistol, this girl. Love her.
person Anon
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have a feeling I know exactly whose chest she's straddling.

And you've added Lucius to the mix. Yay! I do love a good Luciusandsnapecompeteforthegirl story. Did you get that?

Anyway, great chapter. More please!