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for Jaded

by YamiBakura

schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! I think this is a great idea for a story (I'm off to red the next part)!
person KCRae
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please don't make this a one shot. I want to see them work past this bitter, petty, rivalry. And Arthur is Minister!!! How are the rest of the weasley's? I hope their okay, at least some of them! Well okay, keep going if you can.
person L_C
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Im liking the story! But you cant leave it there! It needs a few more chapters now :p would make a fab multi-story fic if you went into more detail of america using flashbacks. id keep reading for sure!

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person misslala
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh wow. I liked that!!! It was so brutal and raw. The letter from Remus brought a tear to my eye. *sniffle* I was hoping for some hot sex, BUT I will take that. So well written and emotional! Rock on!
person Lola
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes, wite. It's good, the story I mean. I hate black socks though.
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please write more when your writers block goes the fuck AWAY.
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can't be the epilogue so soon!! I've gotta have lots more!
person pittwitch
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm quite curious as to why the Minister would have Draco of all people follow Harry, among many others. Quite an interesting beginning, I hope there's more? Thanks for sharing, Pitt