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for Too Young

by tivogirl

person ZooArmy
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the most amazing stories I had the luck to come along, in a very long time. You're really gifted with writing and the idea of the story is so unique. I think you've found a new fan in me ^_^
Gods, this kiss was the sweetest. *sigh*
I hope you update soon, it would make me happy.
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love this story. olivia's temper tamperm ( how ever you spell) was perfect. reminded me of my daughters. but dracos way of handling it was awesome. it is amazing that a 2 year old can bring grown men to their knees.

please tell me someone is going to do something about the slytherins? i cant stand draco getting hurt. but i guess harry can always kiss it and make it better. love a childs way of thinking.

cant wait to see other kind of magic olivia can do. seems she is going to be one special girl.
schedule July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
woah! i so love ur story.. but im a little confused.. in the first chapter.. u said that 'coco' and livvie are cousins... then on the 2nd or 3rd.. u said that draco and sarah are cousins... doesnt that mean that livvie is draco's niece? hehe just askin ;) neweiz, keep it up.. i luv this!!!
schedule July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Will Draco have a nightmare alerting Harry to what happens in the dorms? Sooo need chapter 4!
schedule July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Duuude, I'm loving every minute of it! I hope you keep it up, which I think you will be. Good stuff!
person Selera
schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is so wonderful and I'm glad you updated.
schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a lovely story. I'm glad to see Draco back in the story.
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I sooo need chapter 3! Harry is doing wonderful! Dobby is a hoot!
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I'm loving it. Keep it going. You're very talented at writing. :)
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was awesome. I hope you write more about this plot!!