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for Too Young

by tivogirl

person Amessis
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, what an awful choice to make. Well done!
person Anon
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this story with it's twist and turns on the emotional rollercoaster. I feel Olivia she has been through so much already and there goes another thing to add to the soup. I see Harry & Draco relationship (if you can call it that)is progressing this is nice I want to see how Granger & Weasley will take it when they notice the new spin. Well here hoping Olivia will pull through.
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, but you said at first that Draco was South and Neville was West, then in a few paragraphs, you said that Draco was West and that Neville was South...just pointing out an error that stuck out at me. :)
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thank god . i hate getting into a really good story like yours and there be no ending . i will be waiting for more again very good story . thank you
schedule August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww, what is wrong with Livvie??? I hope they figure it out. Is it because of Harry and Draco finally getting together, and she is feeling left out??? I am so glad that Harry decided to give Draco a chance. Keep up the great work.
Kat
person ZooArmy
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY!!! They are together. Thank you!
You make a wonderful job and it's good to know that the story won't be abandoned some time in the future.
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love that you wrote this before posting... it makes you better than most all of us!
:-) loving the story so far.
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wonderful christmas present for harry and draco. what a kiss.

now poor olivia. i really would hate to be in harry's shoes.

schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story. It is so sweet and inocent. I hope Harry and Draco can get together without Harry feeling to guilty. I know Livvie would love that. Keep up the great work.
Kat
person Amessis
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was so sweet! I hope Harry gets his courage up where Draco is concerned- you know, a nice kiss or something?