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for Too Young

by tivogirl

schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Will there be no eppy? Does he get his magic back? Where do they live? Does Harry kill Voldy? Do they have any more kids?
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wonderful story. i just loved the ending.

thanks
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i read the story completely through to the end today. it was very original and well written. i loved it right up until the end. your ending SUCKED! you leave to many unanswered questions! you need an epilogue or a sequel! you are a great writer, so get to your computer and start typing a real ending!!!!
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that's it? wow. good story, but for some concrit, I think it ended a bit abruptly...
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a very sweet story to read and enjoy. Olivia was a child to give your heart to. Will there be a sequel to this story that is their 7th year and beyond??
person anniea
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow this is good, please update soon *kisses*
person Amessis
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh well done again! I hope they both come out okay
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Here's hoping that Olivia is cured and Draco's magic is saved also.
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well! This took a sad and depressing turn. I was hoping Harry was finally going to have some happiness, but that was a tear puller.
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 10! Leave the shield for now while trying to find a cure and a means to get rid of Voldemort. She's still a baby. It can be fixed.