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for Too Young

by tivogirl

schedule July 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Such a sweet sweet story!!
schedule February 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Cute story, but I really don't like that you had Harry having a child at such a young age and to a character who has nothing to do with Harry Potter the series at all. And I don't really like the idea of him being a Pagen. Usually, witches are Wiccans, that's their religion. Pagen really isn't all that common. It's just strange to me. And you should know, that you never sleep with your child on top of you, if you were to turn over, you could suffocate your child. People, don't seem to realize that but it can happen.
person hpn827
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NO!!!!!!!!!!! Don't end it like that. At least write an epilogue to tell us what happened or better yet a sequel. If you are please email me at hpn827@yahoo.com.
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The end? COME ON!! No way, i need a sequel. I read the whole thing in one go and loved it, i couldn't stop. Please write a sequel.

This story means so much to me. My mother has to work and my sister(who is 5) needs looking after, so i help out. I absolutely adored the scene where the four grown men were sitting with their heads in their hands. Been there, i so get where they are coming from. I loved how you showed it getting easier to take care of her.

Poor Livvie. I know she got better but still, first losing her parents and then nearly dieing. Poor Draco.

I have a question. Are you a Pagan? I am and your descriptions of the rituals were so accurate. Thank you so very much for showing my religion in such a wonderful light. It made me feel better about my beliefs. I am the only Pagan in my family and in my social circle, so it can be a bit isolating at times, but your story gave me a ray of light.

Thank you so much for this story, and please write a sequel.

If you want to get in touch with me, leave a review for Divorce, Disaster and Denial. It's in the Harry Lucius section. I wrote it and i check the responses every day. I would feel so honoured if you could read it and tell me what you think.

Please write a sequel. I need more.

Luv Tori
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was so heartfelt, and sad. I cried...I really did. But that wasn't fair...I wanted to see some more of Draco and Harry's relationship... Btw, "Coco" was just toooo damn cute! ^+^ ~Kairen
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! It can't be over. I love this fic. I want to know if Draco ever fully recovers. You have to do a sequel. Keep up the great work.
Kat
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sequel!!!! Gotta have more! Did Draco get his magic back?
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad I finally got to the ending! And it was ended but still open too. Sequel?? Maybe? Wonderful work and well worth the wait. It was very good! *offers jell-o cup*
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i wonder no part two? oh well it was great!
person ZooArmy
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What? WHAT? WHAT? The End? You cannot leave it like that! No, you simply can't. There are so many questions that need to be answered.