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Aw! This is really sad. Usually you only see fics where everyone is falling for Harry and he has to break their hearts, so this is quite unusual. Your style was very affecting, and it really made me feel for poor Harry. Bastard Cedric -- breaking his heart!

Lovely little fic; very good for your first try. I like the way you portrayed Harry's emotions and his confusion on Cedric suddenly being with Cho. Looking forward to read more of your work,

Alaine.

I'm astounded this has garnered so few reviews! This is beautifully written! Really, I've said it before, but now, having read everything you've posted, I really am looking forward to reading more of your work! I like that you've shown Harry's rather stunted emotional range (understandable given the way he way raised) and it's this that makes the story, as well as shows your understanding of the character. Bravo on another excellent piece of work!

Now, I'm not a Harry/Cedric shipper but this is awesome. The sex was absolutely hot in each case but that wouldn't have been enough for me to catch my eye. I very much loved Harry's voice. He was a bit detached, somehow not really in one with his emotions. I'm not sure if it's clear what I mean... but he seems a bit... emotionally disturbed is too harsh a word but certainly not able to truly understand his own emotions. I think that would make a lot of sense with Harry, with his background. I love the title because it does refer to all the pairings in a way... in Cedric's case obviously so, and of course we all know about Colin. And Draco *cuddles Draco* I am convinced he only stopped seeing Harry because he realized Harry wasn't passionately in love with him, and fucking was just not enough because he had always been in love with Harry. :P

See? now why doesn't this have more reviews? fucking beautiful, for sure.

love it.

Ouch. That ending was a little harsh.
Still, I like the fic. It's unusual, and the sex is hot. *g* However, it does make you wonder whether in this reality, Harry will ever love again... and whom. Sequel? *puppy dog eyes*
Just noticed I reviewed your other fic under the wrong name. Oops. Anyway, in case you're still reading, I recently updated. : )
Hugs,
k.

...Wow, just, wow. Great job with this (though, it doesn't help that you fuel my already burning hatred for Cho *sighs*)