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for I, Sirius

by DarkLoveZorg

schedule September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh bloody monkeys!!! damn it!! i want more. i'm have a problem when i read harry potter. i read aloud, with a horrendious fake british accent. and then... then i can't stop. so i'm kinda stuck right now. anyway, i love this story. it's funny and exciting, and i really want to see more. i particularly enjoy the way it's written. the lack of dialogue and random tangents sirius goes on really entertain me. of course, the one that i particularly noticed was when he went into the summer after their seventh year in the middle of the tea party story. i was like...'did he forget about the party?' but it was still good. i really like this story and i hope you continue to post. i'd really like to know what else happens.~
person lafan
schedule December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow...this is bloody great, I tell you! Just as if one is in his head...absolutely fantastic, I just love it! Keep it coming, please!!!:)))
schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really love this fic, as well as your style of writing. You manage to sound intelligent and sophisticated, etc. and still make it sound natural, without sounding stiff or pretentious (something I envy you for quite a bit). The story reminds me a bit of David Copperfield, especially the beginning. And, like everyone else, I love it when Sirius digresses into his little tangents about Remus' arse or something. Please, continue, I'm dying to see what happens next!
person Anon
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Eee!! I love this story.

Ok, now I've said that. I should be studying, but when I saw the new chapter up, I immediately tossed my anatomy book aside and started reading. Test? Who needs to pass a silly anatomy test? I, Sirius is much more interesting than the central nervous system.

I love the way you write. You have amazing talent. I giggle every time Sirius gets off subject and then catches himself. And I adore the little lines directed toward Remus. Heh. Amazing story. I know, I'm repeating myself, but I really do love it. Can't wait for more.

X Cacoethes
person Anon
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. This one made me sad. I always get that way about Lily and James, though. Still love this story and I hope you'll keep writing it.
person Anon
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww...an angel? What a place to end a chapter! Must...have...more. Love it!
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really, relly like this story so far. Very well written. I have to say, my favorite parts are when Sirius goes off on his little tangents, and then catches himself a bit later like, "Oh... right... where was I?"

Really nicely done, and I'll be looking forward to more.
person FarAway
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is fantastic!

I'm loving it. And not even like McDonald's either, I mean I'm really, massively loving it.
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yet another wonderful story. i can't wait to read more, and i really hope you continue writing this fic. best wishes!
person Anon
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story! Especially the way it's written (the way Sirius talks). Please write more.....pretty, pretty please??