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Please update this story is really good

OMG that was hot. So the asshole Bishop Snape was back god I hope he dies. I cant wait to read chapter 8.

Mike
do you think I'm going to let Hermione end up with Snape?
this is a Harry /Hermione story.

see this is where good stories go bad, you are forcing a conflict whee none is needed. Making hermione go back to severus without a half decent reason why makes this last chapter weak. You give hermione every reason to stay with harry and none at all to leave. My guess is you want some bdsm with sev/hr, in that case the whole harry part of your story ws pointless. Why build up a love, then without any real reason break them up. Oh they paid the ransom, wow talk about a writer forcing a story to go one way without any build up. That just shows me that you're a bad writer when you make things happen without a cause or reason. Now if hermione does end up going back i already know where this is heading tons of torture possible rape for hermione then harry the hero months later. You had originality but you lost it when you went cliched with the lost love route. Next time just make this a snape/hr story and not bring harry into it, just confuses your plot and adds nothing to your bdsm fantasies.

Wow that was a really good chapter, yay for the nice h/hr scenes and especially the little bit where hermione was drunk that was a good piece of humour. The sex scenes were also well done.

hot danm that was bloody great. So Hermione finally gives into temptation and lust most important love. Please update soon.

i truly enjoy this story. its great.

amazing fic but please update soon

Hi I love this story, its unlike anything else out there please update again soon I'm on the edge of my seat waiting.

this is a really good story so far. i want to know if hermione gives in to the passion between her and harry please please continue.