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by Lilac

person kaj
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I mean there must be a way to remove the flesh without Snape's "help". I don't mean about Snape's intention in bedding Hermione but why good people have to bend over to bad people. White magic is powerful and as we should not succumb to terrorism we should not succumb to evilness. Please please oh please shows Hermione that White magic is Strong and Powerful and Beautiful. It's a matter of concept to me more than anything.
Aside from that this story is great.... I like it... one of my fav at AFF. Keep writing and update soon!!!
person Lisa1352
schedule May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Franzl

Hermione will not be tainted forever. Once she has the skin removed she will be as you put it PURE again.. it not like they had sex or he raped her.
person mike
schedule May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
franzl is an idiot and this story is great, this whole pure concept is his/her delussions on how hermione should act or girls in general. Why i bet that he/she wouldn't bat an eye at a story where harry fucks anthing that walks while hermione stays a "pure" virgin waiting for harry. Seriously some people need to realize that stories where hermione or harry see other people(even if some people can't stand it) before they fall in love or finally are together is still harmony. Harmony is about harry and hermione with all their trials and tribulations that brings them together. Stories can be entirely h/hr or have h/oc and hr/oc but end in h/hr. Seriously some h/hr shippers need a reality check on the ship as a whole it is not about the journey so much as it is about the ending.
person mike
schedule May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow that was a good chapter, i really hope even though i'm a strong h/hr shipper you make a hr/ss scene just because it feels like it is needed to complete the story, but that's just my opinion.
person K
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the story a lot, I just think the editing could be a little more refined, but the plot is really good.
person Muffy
schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story idea. I feel bad for Hermione, she's been through quite a bit. *crosses fingers* for some sustained happiness for my OTP. Thanks!
schedule April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Please update faster. I like this alternate universe you created.
person kaj
schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah... yes Ligilimency. That's Snape's expertise. While i am not really sure if Ligilimency can be performed from a far. it must be dark magic. Please promise me that this story will end Harry/Hermione... If not i wont read it. Good story!! I really like it... keep writing!!! and soon updating!!!
person kaj
schedule April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is a great story! No distraction just running smooth and easy to read. But what is it about the archbishop... He's insane and maniac. How come a wizard become an archbishop. He's fooling all of them. Will he take revenge on Harry? Please keep writing and soon updating. Good Job!!!
person oneiros lykos
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is such an awesome story! I can't wait to see how Severus comes back though...